Everything was amazing but check it makes sense and a couple of the facts were not facts, but aside from that it was amazing which I cannot think of another word for what this was it was marvellous, fabulous and every other synonym for fantastic and extraordinary.
It was brilliant because you described what we done and learned.
but what you need to work on is to write a bit more.
Everything was amazing but check it makes sense and a couple of the facts were not facts, but aside from that it was amazing which I cannot think of another word for what this was it was marvellous, fabulous and every other synonym for fantastic and extraordinary.
Brilliant information and scientific vocabulary. I would check for sense and spellings mistakes. For example Bold ‘Egle’, ‘differant’.