I like it, but it doesn’t really tell us about what happened in the day because you only went on about birds . In the first sentence it didn’t make sense because you wrote bought instead of brought .
This was amazing! I love the font you used for your title! Like a new-born kitten, excellent simile! You could add more information and check for commas.
Good info I liked the Goshawk as well very nice 🙂
I like it, but it doesn’t really tell us about what happened in the day because you only went on about birds . In the first sentence it didn’t make sense because you wrote bought instead of brought .
*great information I love the facts because it gave a personal opinion about the birds, but I would like to know a bit more about the Goshawk.* 🙂
It was great ,but you could add some more about the day . I really liked reading it .
Very good but you could of put more information about the little owl .
I like your blog because it has the excellent spelling and punction well-done Ben.c
This was amazing! I love the font you used for your title! Like a new-born kitten, excellent simile! You could add more information and check for commas.
Well done!