Charlie – this is great.
Please add another paragraph before the end about the actual dolphin ride. Tell your readers how you felt and what you could see, hear, touch while you were on the dolphin.
Look at the powerpoint again. I’ve added another lesson on adverbs which will give you some good ideas about how to make your writing even better. Looking forward to seeing it. 🙂
Charlie – this is great.
Please add another paragraph before the end about the actual dolphin ride. Tell your readers how you felt and what you could see, hear, touch while you were on the dolphin.
Look at the powerpoint again. I’ve added another lesson on adverbs which will give you some good ideas about how to make your writing even better. Looking forward to seeing it. 🙂