thank you for teaching us what to do in a earth quake.
very good spelling but add more photos’ next time
very good writing maybe make the title bigger so people can know its a title
I like the explanation of what to do in a earthquake but I think that you could make the title bigger than the rest of the writing
I really like how much writing you didi but you could maybe next time add some more pictures. From Joshua Wright.
I think it’s amazing but maybe next time add a bit more coluor!!!!!
Emily!
hi miss hunt its lexi i think this information is helpful and how you survive is very a very good description I would change the colour of the writing though although this ids very good
I really like how much writing you did but you could maybe next time add some more pictures. From Joshua Wright.
maybe you can do some animations
I really like your picture and your writing but next time can you color it please?
Nice writing you could change the subheadings to a capital.
it was really good and your picture was nice but next time please underline your subheadings and title and make them bigger
jessy
nice writing
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thank you for teaching us what to do in a earth quake.
very good spelling but add more photos’ next time
very good writing maybe make the title bigger so people can know its a title
I like the explanation of what to do in a earthquake but I think that you could make the title bigger than the rest of the writing
I really like how much writing you didi but you could maybe next time add some more pictures.
From Joshua Wright.
I think it’s amazing but maybe next time add a bit more coluor!!!!!
Emily!
hi miss hunt its lexi i think this information is helpful and how you survive is very a very good description I would change the colour of the writing though although this ids very good
I really like how much writing you did but you could maybe next time add some more pictures.
From Joshua Wright.
maybe you can do some animations
I really like your picture and your writing but next time can you color it please?
Nice writing you could change the subheadings to a capital.
it was really good and your picture was nice but next time please underline your subheadings and title and make them bigger
jessy
nice writing