hi TYLER its lexi and i really like the style of your writing but i think you could take away some pictures i think theres a bit to much pictures but other than that its AMAZING from lexi
i really like the way that you have added a border but i think that there are a couple to many pictures so maybe take out some of the pictures but over than that it looks faboules from willow
Hi Tyler its Henry here, I just wanted to comment and next time you need to take a few pictures away because theres a lot of pictures and good subheadings!
hi TYLER its lexi and i really like the style of your writing but i think you could take away some pictures i think theres a bit to much pictures but other than that its AMAZING from lexi
i really like the way that you have added a border but i think that there are a couple to many pictures so maybe take out some of the pictures but over than that it looks faboules from willow
Hi Tyler its Henry here, I just wanted to comment and next time you need to take a few pictures away because theres a lot of pictures and good subheadings!
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