This is one of the best blogs I have ever seen! I love this because you’ve explained everything and I know a bit more about the Birds Of Prey visit as well. Although there are no pictures, you did a good job but where are the Capital Letters for:
The title
The second paragraph
It was fantastic but when you go through to check it I would recommend looking for spaces, capital letters and double check that it makes sense. I loved it anyway because you really expressed how fun it was and would definitely make other people want to experience what we have experienced.
This is one of the best blogs I have ever seen! I love this because you’ve explained everything and I know a bit more about the Birds Of Prey visit as well. Although there are no pictures, you did a good job but where are the Capital Letters for:
The title
The second paragraph
Over all, it was great!
It was fantastic but when you go through to check it I would recommend looking for spaces, capital letters and double check that it makes sense. I loved it anyway because you really expressed how fun it was and would definitely make other people want to experience what we have experienced.
It makes sense to me I suggest that you could improve on using, capital letters 🙂