Please check for the correct punctuation for the beginning and end of your sentences. Homophones: their/there Paragraphs
It was good and the description is great . You missed one capital letter ,but the blog itself is fabulous.
it was brilliant because you described what we done and what we learned.
Hi Josh I have read your blog and thought it is very good because you said about where they came from and some key things about the birds. You could put how tall they are and how much they weigh.
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Please check for the correct punctuation for the beginning and end of your sentences.
Homophones: their/there
Paragraphs
It was good and the description is great . You missed one capital letter ,but the blog itself is fabulous.
it was brilliant because you described what we done and what we learned.
Hi Josh I have read your blog and thought it is very good because you said about where they came from and some key things about the birds. You could put how tall they are and how much they weigh.