I think this is a great blog as it made sense and you described the entire day if I was not there I could be able to tell the main parts of the day. you could of describes some of the falconary meanings but it was still absoulotely great also you could of ended with a full stop though.
Oliver I think it is good but I have seen some words is wrong like Skye but is fine and is one good blog but next time write more things is really good the punctuation really. Well done Oliver for do a good blog.
I think this is a great blog as it made sense and you described the entire day if I was not there I could be able to tell the main parts of the day. you could of describes some of the falconary meanings but it was still absoulotely great also you could of ended with a full stop though.
When you are typing make sure to check your spelling, also if you are about to finish make sure you complete you sentence. But very well typed. 🙂
Oliver I think it is good but I have seen some words is wrong like Skye but is fine and is one good blog but next time write more things is really good the punctuation really. Well done Oliver for do a good blog.