I was mesmerized by your blog ,it was fantastic , you described every bird amazingly and if I wasn’t there I would have known what you did , also I loved how you added a bit of history.
This was an amazing blog. There was alot of good vocabulary and good punctuation but there was some missing eg commas (,) in the last paragraph but apart from that it was amazing. I think the people that weren’t there would know for sure!
I was mesmerized by your blog ,it was fantastic , you described every bird amazingly and if I wasn’t there I would have known what you did , also I loved how you added a bit of history.
This was an amazing blog. There was alot of good vocabulary and good punctuation but there was some missing eg commas (,) in the last paragraph but apart from that it was amazing. I think the people that weren’t there would know for sure!
I loved what you did it was really amazing. You probably could have added a bit more information about the day. It was still amazing.