Hi Charlie I really enjoyed your blog and it had a lot of detail and if I was not there I would now know what you did on that day. I saw a little bit of punctuation missing near the end also you could of described the birds and a little fact file of a certain bird like its wing span, height and age. Would you be able to tell us out of the bloom how long they can live in the wild.
I personally think that its an amazing blog I like that you tell us about what we done on this certain day of the week and I think after this I think “save the birds” will stay in my head for life its perfect and amazing and so far its the best!!!
Really good blog Charlie I think is the best blog because is interesting I seen in here and really good punctuation, well done to know how to put photos in the blog. (Well done Charlie)
This blog is amazing because it has a good description but I have found a spelling mistake. You have spelt Sage wrong, you have spelt it like “Saige” and it is supposed to be Sage. So you could put the pictures on the paragraph it tells you about, but they really do link to the description of what the blog is telling us about.
This was very good but to improve it you could correct the spelling of sage and maybe more punctuation (at the bottom paragraph) and that is pretty much it. It was amazing other than that. The pictures where also good .
Your blog was very interesting because you had lots of information I liked how you added a way to raise awareness to “save the birds” well done , don’t forget some commas.
Hi Charlie your blog is very enjoyable to read because there is a lot of detail in it. It is very interesting as well ,by the way you could add more facts about the birds .
This was a great blog it described the entire day I could manage to figure the main parts oft the day from reading this blog even if I was not there at that point. To improve the blog yo could of added more description but still this was a great blog.
This blog was really good if I didn’t know about birds of prey this would explain every thing to me and what you did on that day. Also it said about the dissecting of the pellets and it tells us her company but you could of went into more detail of all of the facts and the sheets before break time overall it was a marvellous blog about the birds of prey .
I like your blog because it says what we had done on that day and it says the facts about what we already have done and also it makes sense and also you have the correct punctuation
It was amazing Chaz , you just missed some punctuation on the last paragraph .I like how you laid it out and I really like the way you have said everything .I love the picture , the first one is sooooooo cute .
Hi Charlie I really enjoyed your blog and it had a lot of detail and if I was not there I would now know what you did on that day. I saw a little bit of punctuation missing near the end also you could of described the birds and a little fact file of a certain bird like its wing span, height and age. Would you be able to tell us out of the bloom how long they can live in the wild.
This is AMAZING I LOVED that you would remember to “Save the Birds”.
I personally think that its an amazing blog I like that you tell us about what we done on this certain day of the week and I think after this I think “save the birds” will stay in my head for life its perfect and amazing and so far its the best!!!
It made sense it was a good quality writing I think you could improve the description and Better word classes.
Really good blog Charlie I think is the best blog because is interesting I seen in here and really good punctuation, well done to know how to put photos in the blog. (Well done Charlie)
This blog is amazing because it has a good description but I have found a spelling mistake. You have spelt Sage wrong, you have spelt it like “Saige” and it is supposed to be Sage. So you could put the pictures on the paragraph it tells you about, but they really do link to the description of what the blog is telling us about.
This was very good but to improve it you could correct the spelling of sage and maybe more punctuation (at the bottom paragraph) and that is pretty much it. It was amazing other than that. The pictures where also good .
Your blog was very interesting because you had lots of information I liked how you added a way to raise awareness to “save the birds” well done , don’t forget some commas.
Hi Charlie your blog is very enjoyable to read because there is a lot of detail in it. It is very interesting as well ,by the way you could add more facts about the birds .
This was a great blog it described the entire day I could manage to figure the main parts oft the day from reading this blog even if I was not there at that point. To improve the blog yo could of added more description but still this was a great blog.
This blog was really good if I didn’t know about birds of prey this would explain every thing to me and what you did on that day. Also it said about the dissecting of the pellets and it tells us her company but you could of went into more detail of all of the facts and the sheets before break time overall it was a marvellous blog about the birds of prey .
I like your blog because it says what we had done on that day and it says the facts about what we already have done and also it makes sense and also you have the correct punctuation
It was amazing Chaz , you just missed some punctuation on the last paragraph .I like how you laid it out and I really like the way you have said everything .I love the picture , the first one is sooooooo cute .
It was brilliant because good description and good punctuation.
At the end you have missed some punctuation out but over then that it was realy good and nice